Though I could not caution all I still might warn a few; Don't raise your hand to raise no flag atop no ship of fools. - Robert Hunter
Not bad, for a first time on a customer's piece. Nice and straight, but a bit light. Oh well, even Carter misses on his marks, and realistically, this turned out great!
I really like it, I think it's important to brand your work, but at the same time not be too "look at me!" I think you have achieved that very well, very classy!
In order to make delicious food, you must eat delicious food. Jiro Ono